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    Friday, December 29th, 2006
    10:34 pm
    New poem
    This is a poem about what Nitro, West Virginia smells like.

    Nitro

    nitro is black
    snake skin
    and slug trail
    bade nostril dredge

    putrid city semen
    vile breezes and
    intestine chemicals

    each hovel contains humans
    scattered geometry
    flung at the land

    distorted rocks
    crags and caves
    into the haze of

    stale stench and
    gutt wrenching air
    ripping lung
    and windpipe

    Current Mood: uncomfortable
    Thursday, October 26th, 2006
    5:19 am
    Here is a poem that I wrote at a workshop.
    The word of the day was "Prison", and I was off.

    Prison

    Like the point at which I return and fall upon your door,
    I return again to these bars which are within me.
    Some apparent delusion that this flesh holds something
    More than just a heart, or the morning I came out wet and
    Expecting to see the dawn as rosy fingered as you said it was;
    But sweet as this flowering tree the day continues.

    Anyone so filled, (like these eyes could hold such things as wood
    or green against the brown), are not alone in wonder of harmonies,
    or solem in their silence, for all things as these sounds are tribute
    to being alive; are so simple they confuse minds and cause added
    abstractions which can only recreate the enormous hope we all live in;
    they are themselves our gods, little and so real that they can be held, or
    be herd to fall against each other with the apparent bending of limbs.

    How can we fit all these points together?

    It is as simple as finding your hand able to reach out and grasp;
    it is sense, more than anything you are told, that contains this earth,
    these huge rumblings of ocean and hill, they are your hope against blindness.

    Along the rim of observation, the fog curls itself round, unlike a cat but sounding so similar

    The prison then, if one be known
    is the palm which can only hold,
    is the eye that tries to tell you about color
    and after a long line of questioning
    so many versions all wash together
    and the mud of truth finds the ocean
    as a formal bed in a crowded room.
    Thursday, July 6th, 2006
    12:26 am
    Another Poem
    The squat named robustulite fruit called summer
    salting your tongue
    pulls apples onto the boughs
    with sunlight fucking the manured garden

    I kneel
    creek stone and angled bark stand upward
    pointing the shredded clouds alive
    sounding a past rain
    with moss crawling the hill

    Over the past dirt
    once leaves now sperm of solar wind
    and MOON
    the swirling fog illumined

    The seen earth
    grows green and blues a weather
    more severe for your silver eyes:

    Contrasting
    the planet swings you
    about one then all places
    swings itself gathered and twisting
    flung mathematically holy
    (not nailed to a tree)
    and brilliantly firing
    massive bulk into light

    Gesture of love
    cause before the effect
    brings bright radiant distances
    and fucking cosmic chemicals
    unto christian and crystal alike
    and no void in the light of our sun
    son of light
    no death
    no longer
    dark
    Friday, February 10th, 2006
    9:33 pm
    Second entry:

    Thanks for the commentary, but I am not such a fan of Sandburg. For me, he lacks a certain subtlety, and as he tries to be Whitmanesque in his delight of "the workers", he fails to exalt the humanity of humans. This is not to say that I do not enjoy his poems, on the contrary; "Aprons of Silence" is cutting, precise in its detail, and vivid in its feeling. I can certainly envision his sentiment & take in his feeling of being, of living in "The City".

    However, the poem I posted, was most influenced by my favorite poet, Kenneth Patchen. I totally stole his line, "the placating of polar giraffes", but I thought it appropriate at the time. I think I wrote that poem almost twenty years ago.

    It is interesting that at the time I was reading about Wahhabi Islamists, (This was Pre-Taliban), and their extreme view of Religion. It seemed to me then, that they would be a threat, not only to Western ideals, but to all women. It kind of pissed me off. I guess that is what I meant by the line about flowers and missiles.

    Here in a little while, I will post another poem.
    Thursday, February 9th, 2006
    12:08 am
    My first entry
    Hi, I am just starting to figure this out, but to start I will post a poem.

    Because I Stopped Writing Poetry For You

    The walls of skin inside your apartment
    Burned and three days later the mayor
    Phoned me up to congratulate me on
    The murder I had committed for the
    Sake of Unicorns and Virgins and
    Countless other social blights created
    For congressmen to wad up and throw
    At each other while a thousand
    Junkies marched outside the White House
    Screaming for cleaner needles and the
    Deregulation of Junk. The Society for the
    Placating of Polar Giraffes now sends chain
    Letters in Arabic to English factory workers,
    And since no one has ever heard of a Wahhabi
    Recidivist before, we now have an ample supply
    Of flowers to plant around our nuclear missiles.
    So it must have been the President who said,
    "We have nothing to fear except the fact that
    We are totally naked underneath our clothes".
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